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Post by Dr. Anna McBreadle on Apr 3, 2009 11:41:15 GMT -10
“The service was beautiful, congratulations to the both of you.” Calleigh recognised that voice, “Anna! It’s great to see you. I’m really happy you could make it to be godparents. Where’s Hugh gone?” Calleigh gave Anna a hug, “he’s around somewhere. He’ll be showing Chloe off to everyone. The rest of your team haven’t met her yet.” “She’s getting big now,” Calleigh sounded surprised herself. Chloe was growing up very quickly and she felt that she was missing it with the McBreadles living so far away. “Oh don’t remind me, it’s flying by. Anyway, where have your two gone?”
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Post by sanne on Apr 3, 2009 11:49:06 GMT -10
Yahoooo....another sequel with Hugh and Anna......... Sandra
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Post by Dr. Anna McBreadle on Apr 3, 2009 11:52:40 GMT -10
i take it you like hugh and anna then, sandra?? luv sam x
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Post by margaret1234 on Apr 3, 2009 12:50:16 GMT -10
Crumbs......you've been busy........looking forward to reading. Great wallpaper.
Margaret
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Post by Dr. Anna McBreadle on Apr 3, 2009 14:34:23 GMT -10
i have been very busy margaret! i've been writing my stories whilst writing my essays for college! i think of it as a break from my essays when i've had enough of serious writing so i go on to my creative writing then go back to my essays. im obviously going to wait until i've finished posting Ripper! before i start posting this one plus im still in the process of writing this one! the only downfall to this sequel is i can't do my normal slanging matches between horatio and stetler after what happened in From Vegas with Love! i'll miss that as i loved writing for those two! luv sam x
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Post by sanne on Apr 3, 2009 21:26:27 GMT -10
Well, I did like the previous stories with Hugh and Anna, so I think this will be a very nice read as well....... Sandra
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Post by gonsy on Apr 4, 2009 8:53:02 GMT -10
Sam very nice wallpaper! Gonsy
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Post by Dr. Anna McBreadle on Apr 5, 2009 10:11:49 GMT -10
i have another snippet for you, just to tease you all! luv sam x
Horatio made his way to the staff room and met a sorry sight. Eric was laid across the sofa with a cold wet towel across his face and Ryan was unusually dressed like he’d been dragged through a hedge backwards. Ryan had just sat down with a cup of coffee for himself and Eric who sat up to take a sip. “You know what Ryan, I am never drinking again.” “Now where have I heard that one before?” Ryan had in fact heard Eric say that before, “I never say that because I know I will drink again.” Eric ignored that comment, “luckily for Suze, she hasn’t got a shift today,” Eric took a sip of his coffee, “anyway Mister Wolfe, what happened between you and Natalia after we left the club last night? We were waiting with you to go home one minute, the next you’d both disappeared.”
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Post by sanne on Apr 5, 2009 19:33:02 GMT -10
Interesting, Sam..... Sandra
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Post by Dr. Anna McBreadle on Apr 7, 2009 7:45:16 GMT -10
i had a thought earlier about this sequel. there may be some of you that haven't read the first four chapters. so i thought i'd do a recap for those who have read it and a brief description of the other sequel for those who haven't. London - H and Cal go to London to apprehend a suspect. they work with Dr. Anna McBreadle who specializes in dermatology. she is married to Hugh McBreadle (imagine Hugh Jackman ;D ) H and Cal's plane is delayed due to typical British weather. Anna lets them stay with her and Hugh for their last night in England. During the next day, they both go to a salsa class with Anna and Hugh. H realizes how he feels about Cal when he see's her dancing. they both go sight seeing afterwards and go on the London Eye. they get very close and kiss. later Anna figures it out and when all four of them go out for a meal together, Anna and Hugh tell H and Cal that they're expecting. the next day, Hugh takes H and Cal on a trip round London before they catch the flight home!
Miami's Secrets - H and Cal have try and keep their relationship under wraps but Cal is acting strange, more cheerful than usual (if thats at all possible). Alexx gets very suspicious of her behaviour and guesses that there is a man involved with her change in behaviour. but when Alexx asks H why she's in a good mood, he just tells her that she has discovered salsa dancing but Alexx doesn't buy it so she gets Natalia on side to find out whats going on. even Frank has noticed a change in Cal's attitude, commenting to H 'she's been like a jumping bean on caffine.' whilst all of this is happening, they have a triple homocide to solve and find that Jake has been up to no good which led to the triple homocide. stetler sticks his nose in where it's not wanted which also gets him into trouble. Alexx and Natalia find out about H and Cal but drag Ryan into it at last minute who gets slightly embarressed and end up confessing to H what's been going on. also during the story, Eric is continually late for shifts but has big problems of his own but eventually confesses to H about his situation.
Friends & Foes - this is my fave of them all. Jake's court case is pending. H and Stetler are at each others throats. Stetler is on Jake's side because if Jake goes down, Stetler's job is at risk. he tries his best to humiliate all that were invovled in the triple homocide by getting the defence attorney to bring up their pasts to make them all look bad. this caused Ryan to take his anger out on an innocent trash can outside the courts. also Hugh and a pregnant Anna turn up. the team also has to solve a murder of a man who had a rare skin disease (my favourite phrase is still 'scler what?') which was diagnosed my Anna. Hugh and Anna supports the team at Jake's court case which involves H, Cal, Eric and Ryan. they eventually get the result and Stetler is forced to eat humble pie! (i enjoyed writing that bit) the story ends with all of the team, Anna and Hugh, Eric's date Suze and Stetler having a meal and drinks. then right at the end, a DuCaine moment.
From Vegas with Love - a crossover with Grissom and Nick from Vegas coming to Miami on the trail of a murderer. starts off with H and Cal returning from London after attending the christening of Chloe McBreadle, Hugh and Anna's daughter. the suspect is very creepy and has a thing for eye balls. Stetler is back to work on a supervised probationary period. H and Grissom don't always see eye to eye but they put their differences aside for the case. after Grissom has left, H calls Stetler to go for a drink with him and tells him that he has just worked with someone more annoying than Stetler and decides to call a final truce. (it's ashame as i loved writing for those two) there is also stomach bug going round and has hit a few of the lab technicians, including Cal. when Cal's bug doesn't subside after Eric and Valera have recovered, she takes herself off to the doctors and it turns out that she's pregnant. after a scan it turns out that Cal and H are expecting twins!
i think thats about it! if i've missed anything then please feel free to add to it! luv sam x
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Post by Dr. Anna McBreadle on Apr 7, 2009 7:52:33 GMT -10
okay, here is the first chapter! you'll witness a side to Stetler you may never see on tv, and as it's been said before, Hugh and Anna are back with their daughter Chloe who i based on my daughter Alisha.
anyway, enjoy! luv sam x
Precious
It was the christening of Donna Jade and Daisy Joanne Caine. The service had gone without a hitch, and now they were in the Caine house celebrating.
“The service was beautiful, congratulations to the both of you.” Calleigh recognised that voice, “Anna! It’s great to see you. I’m really happy you could make it to be godparents. Where’s Hugh gone?” Calleigh gave Anna a hug, “he’s around somewhere. He’ll be showing Chloe off to everyone. The rest of your team haven’t met her yet.” “She’s getting big now,” Calleigh sounded surprised herself. Chloe was growing up very quickly and she felt that she was missing it with the McBreadles living so far away. “Oh don’t remind me, it’s flying by. Anyway, where have your two gone?” Calleigh looked around, Daisy Jo was fast asleep in the pram and Donna was in daddy’s arms, trying to take daddy’s bottle of beer from his hand. Typical Donna, always trying to get into mischief. She then noticed Hugh talking to Horatio, with Chloe sat on his lap.
“Well Daisy Jo is fast asleep over there and Donna is getting into trouble with daddy as usual.” Anna laughed, “I take it you both have your hands full?” “Donna can be a handful, she’s always on the go and wanting to get into things that she’s not supposed to. Daisy Jo is a lot quieter. She loves her sleep, just like her daddy.” “So where does Donna get her mischief qualities from?” Suddenly Calleigh felt a hand on her shoulder, “hey Lambchop.” Calleigh turned round and gave her dad a huge hug then turned to Anna with one of her arms around Duke’s back, “this is my dad Duke, this is where Donna got her mischief genes from.” Duke mocked being offended, “now where would you get an idea like that from?” Duke grinned from ear to ear. “Oh I wander! Daddy, this is Dr Anna McBreadle she’s one of Daisy Jo’s godmothers.” Duke put his hand out to greet Anna, “oh so you’re Anna. Calleigh and Horatio told me all about you both and your daughter. It’s nice to meet you at last.” “Well thank you,” Anna responded to Duke’s gesture. “Now where are those gorgeous grand-daughters of mine?” “Now don’t you go waking Daisy Jo up, you will be in trouble if you do.” Duke had a mischievous smile across his face, “now would I do a thing like that to you Lambchop?” Calleigh’s eyes narrowed to meet her dads, “I mean it dad.” “Okay, okay! Point taken,” Duke wandered over to Horatio who was trying to wrestle his beer bottle from Donna, much to Stetler’s amusement. “Would you like me to take her?” Horatio turned round to meet Duke, “oh yes please. I can’t even have a sip without her grabbing my bottle. Rick’s not being much help, he’s just watching me struggle.” Stetler was stood trying to keep a straight face, “hey Daisy Jo is my god-daughter, not Donna,” Stetler joked but was disappointed that his fun was over. Duke took Donna from Horatio, “now then missus, you don’t want to be starting that, granddad knows all about that. It’s not pretty, just ask mummy.” Donna replied with pulling at Duke’s eyelid, then flashed her big ocean blue eyes at her granddad which melted Duke’s heart, how could he be mad at that? Horatio laughed. Hugh had been sat in his wheelchair watching this episode take place with Chloe sat on his lap, “Horatio, exactly who are Donna’s godparents and who are Daisy Jo’s? I’m a bit confused.” Horatio chuckled, “well, Daisy Jo’s godparents are Anna, Rick, Ryan and Alexx. Donna’s godparents are yourself, Frank, Natalia and Eric.” Hugh was impressed, “now I have trouble remembering who Chloe’s godparents are, but you have two sets to remember, rather you than me mate!” “Uncle Ratio?” a little voice could be heard coming from Hugh’s lap. “Yes sweetheart?” “Please can I have something to eat now?” Horatio crouched down to Chloe’s level, “I’ll tell you what Chloe, do want to come and help me unwrap all of the food on the table?” The little brunette’s brown eyes open wide with excitement, “oh yes please!” Horatio put his hand out and Chloe held it, “and if you do a really good job, you can get your food before everyone else.” Chloe got all excited and jumped off her dad’s lap and went with her Uncle Horatio.
Stetler turned to Hugh, “you’ve lost her now.” Hugh smiled, “well, I don’t mind, she doesn’t get to see Cal and Horatio much or ‘Ratio’ as Chloe calls him.” Duke was struggling to keep Donna under control. She was wriggling about and pulling at Duke’s face, hair, tie or anything she could get her little hands on. “Are you okay there Duke?” Stetler put his empty bottle in the trash can next to him. “Yeah, well, I don’t think that there is any skin left on my face now,” Duke laughed. Stetler put his hands out to Donna who in turn reached out to Stetler. Duke felt relieved that he could keep his face in one piece. As Stetler held Donna, whilst talking to Hugh and Duke, Eric walked past with Suze. “So you do baby-sit children as well as Horatio?” Eric couldn’t resist. Stetler looked at Eric, he wasn’t impressed. Suddenly, Hugh stiffed the air and screwed up his nose, “that doesn’t smell too good.” Stetler lifted up Donna and could smell what Hugh smelt, he looked at Donna, “I think it’s time you went back to your mother.” Eric, Suze, Duke and Hugh burst into laughter. At the food table, Horatio had Chloe as his little helper and uncovering the food. He felt a pair of arms wrap around his waist. He gently turned round to meet Calleigh’s smile. He put his arms around Calleigh, “hey gorgeous.” Horatio gave his girlfriend a kiss on the lips. Chloe pulled a face, “mummy and daddy like to do that.” Horatio and Calleigh chuckled at the innocence of Chloe’s comment. Horatio noticed over Calleigh’s shoulder, Stetler making a beeline for them with Donna in his arms.
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Post by sanne on Apr 7, 2009 8:03:42 GMT -10
Come on Stettie.......take care of it yourself......... Nice start, but I bet this nice setting will come to an end soon enough......no CSI-Miami story without someone dead...... Sandra
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Post by margaret1234 on Apr 7, 2009 8:21:25 GMT -10
Sandra how morbid.........lovely start Sam all cosy, cosy together. But, I agree with Sandra expect we will have a dead body soon and maybe even before this party is over. ;D
Margaret
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Post by Dr. Anna McBreadle on Apr 7, 2009 8:30:02 GMT -10
there is a bit of trouble ahead but it's not what you're thinking! luv sam x
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Post by sanne on Apr 7, 2009 8:42:47 GMT -10
Oh no.....not Stettie going into his old habits ....I just started to like him.......Did I really say this... Sandra
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