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Post by Ace on Nov 10, 2008 6:47:58 GMT -10
Torn
The Sea takes us home, guiding us to love's evergreen dome. Soon we will meet on the shore thos that sailed before. Love and longing will live long forever will they stay strong. Divided between the love for mother and the love for daughter. Forever will I be torn, ever since her love was born. Always will my heart be frail for Undómiel did not sail.
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Post by sanne on Nov 10, 2008 8:00:51 GMT -10
Wonderful, Ace. Sandra
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Post by margaret1234 on Nov 10, 2008 14:06:23 GMT -10
This is so beautiful Ace.
Margaret
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Post by Lindy on Nov 11, 2008 2:36:44 GMT -10
Lovely!
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Post by Ace on Jan 20, 2009 11:28:15 GMT -10
I watch him watching them, always ducking my head when he is looking this way. I admire him from afar, but I cannot afford our eyes meeting. I cannot afford to loose myself again. And I would if our eyes made contact. So I keep watching him, walking on the egg shells, always alert. I am not stalking him if you are wondering, we just happen to dine at the same place from time to time. I like watching him, imagining. I watch him wishing that those hands that cradle the wine glass would caress my face, twirl a curl of my hair between the fingers and put it behind my ear, pull me close to him. I watch him wishing that those lips, now caressing the glass, would be on mine, making me insane.
“Is this seat taken?” I hear someone ask. I look up and my eyes meet ocean blue.
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Post by pinkyster on Jan 20, 2009 11:33:07 GMT -10
Oh my Ace, very nice.
Jen
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Post by margaret1234 on Jan 20, 2009 12:09:27 GMT -10
“Is this seat taken?” I hear someone ask. I look up and my eyes meet ocean blue. Ace, this is beautiful......love this last para ......great ending. Margaret
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Post by sanne on Jan 20, 2009 19:28:02 GMT -10
Fabulous, Ace.......And good to see you're back to writing again.... Sandra
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Post by lucymalta on Jan 20, 2009 21:52:22 GMT -10
Oh my..... Looks like we need to include a poetry award in next years fan fic awards...... <makes a note to oneself>
Very nice Ace.... Love it....
Lucy
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Post by gonsy on Jan 21, 2009 12:07:20 GMT -10
Great, very nice Ace! Gonsy
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Post by Dr. Anna McBreadle on Jan 21, 2009 13:29:47 GMT -10
okay, i have just gone through all six pages, i have laughed and cried and been moved! what have i been missing?? this is a great collection of stories, you should be proud of them, i would!! well done ace! they're great! luv sam x
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Post by Ace on Jan 22, 2009 8:09:04 GMT -10
All six pages... wow. And thank you all so much.
Ace
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Post by michelle on Jan 22, 2009 8:51:35 GMT -10
All of these poems and short stories are brilliant, some of them have had me smiling, some I've had a tear on my eyes, but I really liked the Eric Camdon I love 7th Heaven.
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Post by Ace on Jan 22, 2009 19:47:45 GMT -10
Yay, someone else loves that show too. *hugattack*
Ace
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