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Post by Horatio Caine on Apr 22, 2007 23:08:17 GMT -10
Finished the story today, Really very good, thanks Neteret!
Manon
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Post by helene68 on Apr 23, 2007 5:10:47 GMT -10
Wow Neteret. Powerful indeed. I couldn't stop reading, had to finish it in one go ;D And it could be an explanation for a lot of things Horatio does or doesn't do. Shows once more again how kids get influenced by their parents. Thanks for sharing it with us. Hélène
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Post by Neteret on Apr 23, 2007 6:13:16 GMT -10
Staying with an abusive person (her husband in this case), can drive a person to some very strange behaviors.
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Post by greeklove on Apr 24, 2007 5:31:16 GMT -10
This was an excellent but very sad story.You had some interesting ideas that could explain a lot of things and you backed them up with great arguments.You had put me in thinking if that's the truth or what else could be happening.You present us every time smt new and amaze us, not as the many so called writers who prefer mediocrity,your advancement as a writer is amazing and you like to test and push our limits to the edge.Keep up the good work
kiveli
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Post by ilh214 on Apr 27, 2007 17:45:54 GMT -10
I loved this story. I couldn't stop reading. It was sad but really great. You did a wonderful job writing this. Thanks
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