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Post by Neteret on Apr 20, 2007 7:23:34 GMT -10
Have you ever wondered about what the relationship between Horatio and his mother was? From 'Under Suspicion' and 'Skeletons', we have an idea about what his father was like. How did his mother fit into the picture? It's not a pretty picture, I'm afraid. Rated T but is violent and has a smattering of 'language.' www.fanfiction.net/s/3499731/1/  |
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Post by Lian on Apr 20, 2007 8:14:39 GMT -10
That was really awesome to read...I would love to read the rest.
Lian
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Post by Neteret on Apr 20, 2007 8:16:19 GMT -10
Uhhh, the rest of what?
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Post by Lian on Apr 20, 2007 8:44:58 GMT -10
Probably understood it wrong.
I thought you were adding more to this part of his life.
Sorry ;D
Lian
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Post by Neteret on Apr 20, 2007 8:46:44 GMT -10
Seven chapters not enough? LOL
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Post by Lian on Apr 20, 2007 8:50:46 GMT -10
Yeah I know...I just found out...Sorry, am a bit ADHD today and I ain't checking it out properly, I don't give myself time to do so...I now go read the other 6 chappies...I'll get back to you on this later...way later. ;D ;D ;D ;D
Lian
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Post by Neteret on Apr 20, 2007 8:52:09 GMT -10
LOL. Glad you brought this up! Could be others would have missed it too.
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Post by Lian on Apr 20, 2007 9:14:06 GMT -10
Nah...no one is this ST***D... ;D
Lian
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Post by HoratioCalleigh on Apr 20, 2007 10:39:42 GMT -10
I just finished the 7 chapters. Really nice work for such a disturbing subject matter. Submitted review on FF site for ya.
The Good Rebecca
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Post by Horatio Caine on Apr 20, 2007 12:07:54 GMT -10
Owwww Neteret, thanks a lot, I'm going to print it all and then read it, because it easier to read it from paper I think  Manon |
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Post by katpin31791 on Apr 20, 2007 18:35:21 GMT -10
Very nice. Always a pleasure to read one of your stories. Thanks
Sharon
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Post by Neteret on Apr 22, 2007 7:41:15 GMT -10
Thank you all, so much for your comments. I really appreciate your support.
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Post by helen on Apr 22, 2007 9:45:29 GMT -10
After reading the first chapter I already thought this was going to be a powerful story. Watching CSI Miami and Horatio it well could've been this way for him. He is so shy with women. Not looking straight into their eyes, low voice, almost like a whisper. Making him humble in a way. It's a shame that his dad felt that abuse was a way to control his child. It will work for a while but not for the rest of their lives. The child will learn that on the street. Give the first punch, fight back. Turn the other cheek? No way, not always. So Horatio did what he had to do! But H wouldn't be H if he didn't feel some sort of guilt.
I hope that once we will see how Horatio is with a woman. That we may witness him being happy, feeling relaxed, a woman that he can talk too. Solid with 2 feet on the ground. Not one who has a sad story to carry around with her and bother him with that.
sigh....but I guess that is just whisful thinking.
Thanks Net...it was a sad, but powerful and strong story. I loved every word of it.
Helen
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Post by Neteret on Apr 22, 2007 14:01:11 GMT -10
Even abusive parents can have positive influences on a child's life. Even though she was damaging, his mother was basically a good person.
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Post by helen on Apr 22, 2007 19:24:28 GMT -10
*Even though she was damaging, his mother was basically a good person.*
Basically she was. My guess is (in this story) she new she was wrong ( that's why it didn't happen again) but couldn't help herself. Or didn't know how to. When a woman wants something nice from a man, and she's not getting it from her spouse, then it's understandable that she'll turn to her son.
Helen
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