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Post by Dr. Anna McBreadle on Mar 19, 2009 11:24:56 GMT -10
but I have to admit, if I saw H and JK in the same room together..... I don't think I could cope... Lucy i don't think either of us could, i know i wouldn't! where to look first would be my first dilemma, after i'd picked myself up off the floor! ;D luv sam x
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Post by anastasia on Apr 15, 2009 7:55:38 GMT -10
This is really amazing! Both? Together?(hey could you add Dino as well? LOL) As you see I'm starting with small stories...and heading over to bigger ones The supernatural in the end was a bit spooky, I admit though! ;D Anastasia
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Post by Dr. Anna McBreadle on Apr 15, 2009 7:58:51 GMT -10
im glad you enjoyed it anastasia! i have to admit, i didn't think of dino as well! LOL! luv sam x
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Post by Dr. Anna McBreadle on Apr 17, 2009 9:49:05 GMT -10
i have a new stort story for this thread. it wrote it in the last half hour and thought i'd share.
this is story is called 'what if...' it's about speedle and horatio's thoughts are basically the same as mine.
enjoy! luv sam x
What If…
It was the anniversary of Speedle’s death. Horatio took a deep breath before entering the lab. He could remember Speed’s last words his spoke to him before the shooting.
‘I have plenty of time for that.’
Horatio walked into the staff room, quietly poured himself a cup of coffee and took a sip. He then realised that he was being watched. Ryan, Eric, Calleigh and Natalia were sat watching him. Eric stood up, “H, are you okay?” “I’m fine thanks Eric, why wouldn’t I be?” Horatio spoke softly, almost a whisper. “It’s just today…” “I know Eric, and I’m okay. We’ve got ten minutes until the start of the shift, until then I’ll be in my office if anyone needs me,” Horatio took his cup of coffee to his office. Natalia looked confused, “what’s special about today?” Eric and Calleigh told Natalia about Speed and his untimely death. “Did you know Speed?” Natalia looked at Ryan. Ryan shook his head, “when he died, a spot on Horatio’s team came up, I applied and got the job. Although Horatio was very concerned about my guns.” Calleigh turned to Ryan, “that’s because Horatio had just lost Tim to a dirty gun. He didn’t want the same to happen again.” Ryan suddenly understood, “I’ve been wandering why that was.”
Horatio sat on his chair at his desk and put his coffee down. He sighed very deeply, laid back and closed his eyes. He let his thoughts take over for a while.
What if Speed was still with us today? What would he be doing? Would he have got one of those cars from outside the jewellers on the day he was shot? Would he have learned to clean his gun on a regular basis?
Horatio began to think about what might have been.
If Speed was still with us, maybe we’d never have met Ryan. Speed might have settled down by now with a nice girl. I know he’d like the lab since the refurbishment and he would have got along well with Natalia. Maybe I would have hired Ryan as well, both of them on the team would have been brilliant, much to Stetler's displeasure. Ryan and Speed would have worked well together, well, I think they would have. But I’ll never know.
Horatio opened his eyes, stood up and walked over to the window. He looked up to the sky and sighed, “rest in peace Speed.”
The End
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Post by anastasia on Apr 17, 2009 10:04:00 GMT -10
Since I like both Ryan and Tin, yes, I think it 'd be interesting seeing them inteacting...
It was sweet and emotional, and I liked A LOT!
Great work for half an hour, Sam!
Anastasia
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Post by dragonfly on Apr 17, 2009 10:57:17 GMT -10
That's was beautiful Sam! Thanks for sharing!
Dragonfly
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Post by margaret1234 on Apr 17, 2009 11:21:56 GMT -10
Agree....that was beautiful Sam.
Margaret
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Post by Dr. Anna McBreadle on Apr 17, 2009 11:52:53 GMT -10
i'm glad you liked it! i have actually had some of those thoughts myself! so i put them into a story! luv sam x
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Post by sanne on Apr 17, 2009 13:00:53 GMT -10
I miss Speed........Thnx, Sam, for writing this "In Memoriam". Sandra
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Post by NV Oracle on Apr 17, 2009 19:54:38 GMT -10
Yeah, it was great Sam. I'd been having some of those thoughts, too.
Great story, Sam.
Your friend NV Oracle
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Post by Dr. Anna McBreadle on Apr 18, 2009 9:16:08 GMT -10
@ sandra - i miss speedle too! they should never have killed him off! @ NV - i knew i wasn't the only one to have these thoughts!
luv sam x
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Post by gonsy on Apr 19, 2009 8:39:58 GMT -10
Very nice Sam! Gonsy
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Post by jessica on Apr 21, 2009 1:07:39 GMT -10
So sad.. Speed is always a soft spot for me.. since I've written a lot of stories including him. Very well written, thank you for sharing it with us. Jess
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